diff --git a/m4/ngi-ap3-m4-report.tex b/m4/ngi-ap3-m4-report.tex
index d22f193..1610aee 100644
--- a/m4/ngi-ap3-m4-report.tex
+++ b/m4/ngi-ap3-m4-report.tex
@@ -290,14 +290,13 @@ published in the
 We are in correspondence with the \href{https://www.kjm-online.de/en/}{German
 Commission for the Protections of Minors in the Media (KJM)}.  The commission
 acts as the central supervisory body for the protection of minors in private
-broadcasting and media in Germany. The commission runs a Berlin-based joint
-office of state authorities for media and journalism within the Federal
-republic of Germany. Its plenary congregation meets in Berlin on December 7,
-2022, for which GNU Taler applies with a systematic description and the
-whitepaper on Taler tokens with age restrictions in German language. The
-application is assisted and coordinated by Mr. Henning Mellage, Legal \&
-Supervision Officer, at the Landesanstalt für Medien NRW in Düsseldorf which is
-part of the KJM.
+broadcasting and media in Germany and runs a Berlin-based joint office of state
+authorities for media and journalism within the Federal republic of Germany.
+Its plenary congregation meets in Berlin on December 7, 2022, for which GNU
+Taler applies with a systematic description and the whitepaper on Taler tokens
+with age restrictions in German language. The application is assisted and
+coordinated by Mr. Henning Mellage, Legal \& Supervision Officer, at the
+Landesanstalt für Medien NRW in Düsseldorf which is part of the KJM.
 
 The KJM confirmed its intention to evaluate GNU Taler as recommendable concept
 for the protection of minors and to add GNU Taler to its list of positively
@@ -310,9 +309,9 @@ includes the presentation of GNU Taler in the document
 über positiv bewertete übergreifende Jugendschutzkonzepte}}, which mirrors the
 content of the mentioned website with recommended concepts of youth protection.
 
-GNU Taler is going to be evaluated under the category ``holistic youth
-protection concept''. The KJM uses this category only for concepts that are
-widely accessible to the public and do not only serve a closed user group
+GNU Taler is going to be evaluated for the category ``holistic youth protection
+concept''. The KJM uses this category only for concepts that are widely
+accessible to the public and do not only serve a closed user group
 (closed user group means: access to content or goods is granted only after age
 verification by presenting an official ID card, driving licenses or the
 like---which is endangering privacy, data security, and informational