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@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ such as the MasterCard and VisaCard credit card schemes and computerized
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bank transactions such as SWIFT. These systems enable mass surveillance
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bank transactions such as SWIFT. These systems enable mass surveillance
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by both governments and private companies. Aspects of this surveillance
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by both governments and private companies. Aspects of this surveillance
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sometimes benefit society by providing information about tax evasion or
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sometimes benefit society by providing information about tax evasion or
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crimes like extortion. % TODO : anti-money laundering later?
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crimes like extortion.
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In particular, bribery and corruption are limited to elites who can
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In particular, bribery and corruption are limited to elites who can
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afford to escape the dragnet.
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afford to escape the dragnet.
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society. As bribery is virtually impossible to detect, corruption is
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society. As bribery is virtually impossible to detect, corruption is
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widespread and not limited to social elites.
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widespread and not limited to social elites.
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Zerocash~\cite{zerocash} is an example for translating an
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% SHORTER: Zerocash need not be mentioned so early?
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anarchistic economy into the digital realm.
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% Zerocash~\cite{zerocash} is an example for translating an
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% anarchistic economy into the digital realm.
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This paper describes Taler, a simple and practical payment system for
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This paper describes Taler, a simple and practical payment system for
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a social-liberal society, which is underserved by
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a social-liberal society, which is underserved by
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At present, we feel these relatively new cryptographic techniques incur
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At present, we feel these relatively new cryptographic techniques incur
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unacceptable financial risks to the exchange, due to underdeveloped
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unacceptable financial risks to the exchange, due to underdeveloped
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implementation practice.
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implementation practice.
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% SHORTER: Maybe some of the abbove could be thinned since
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% they do not know much about Taler's refresh protcol yet.
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In this vein, there are pure also zero-knoledge proof based schemes
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In this vein, there are pure also zero-knoledge proof based schemes
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like \cite{ST99}, and subsequently Zerocash~\cite{zerocash}, and maybe
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like \cite{ST99}, and subsequently Zerocash~\cite{zerocash}, and maybe
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