From d8eebc67e6dd823f7522bcd415ed100a398d0e6b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jeffrey Burdges <burdges@gnunet.org>
Date: Sun, 7 May 2017 14:01:02 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Improve abstract

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 \begin{abstract}
 David Chaum's original RSA blind sgnatures provide information theoretic
 anonymity for customers' purchases.  In practice, there are many schemes
-that weaken this to provide properties.  We describe a refresh protocol
-for Taler that provides customers with post-quantum anonymity.
-It replaces an elliptic curve Diffe-Hellman operation with a unique
-hash-based encryption scheme for the proof-of-trust via key knoledge
-property that Taler requires to distinguish untaxable operations from
-taxable purchases. 
+that weaken this to provide properties, such as offline transactions or
+taxability in Taler.  We describe a refresh protocol for Taler that
+provides customers with post-quantum anonymity.  It replaces an elliptic
+curve Diffe-Hellman operation with a hash-based encryption scheme for
+the proof-of-trust via key knoledge property that Taler requires to
+distinguish untaxable operations from taxable purchases. 
 \end{abstract}