diff --git a/doc/paper/taler.tex b/doc/paper/taler.tex index 34120bcd9..e060f2427 100644 --- a/doc/paper/taler.tex +++ b/doc/paper/taler.tex @@ -496,10 +496,10 @@ exposes these events as anchors for tax audits on income. A \emph{coin} in Taler is a public-private key pair where the private key is only known to the owner of the coin. A coin derives its -financial value from an RSA signature over the FDH -of the coin's public key. The exchange has multiple RSA {\em - denomination key} pairs available for blind-signing coins of -different value. +financial value from an RSA signature over the full doman hash (FDH) +of the coin's public key. The exchange has multiple RSA +{\em denomination key} pairs available for blind-signing coins of +different values. Denomination keys have an expiration date, before which any coins signed with it must be spent or refreshed. This allows the exchange @@ -677,7 +677,7 @@ Now the customer carries out the following interaction with the exchange: The exchange receives the transaction and credits the reserve $W_p$ with the respective amount in its database. \item[POST {\tt /withdraw/sign}] - The customer sends $S_W(B)$ where $B := B_b(\FDH_K(C_p))$ to + The customer computes $B := B_b(\FDH_K(C_p))$ and sends $S_W(B)$ to the exchange to request withdrawal of $C$; here, $B_b$ denotes Chaum-style blinding with blinding factor $b$. \item[200 OK / 403 FORBIDDEN] @@ -698,8 +698,8 @@ Now the customer carries out the following interaction with the exchange: error back to the customer, with proof that it operated correctly. Assuming the signature was valid, this would involve showing the transaction history for the reserve. - \item[Done] The customer computes and verifies the unblinded signature - $S_K(\FDH_K(C_p)) = U_b(S_K(B))$. + \item[Done] The customer computes the unblinded signature $U_b(S_K(B))$ and + verifies that $S_K(\FDH_K(C_p)) = U_b(S_K(B))$. Finally the customer saves the coin $\langle S_K(\FDH_K(C_p)), c_s \rangle$ to their local wallet on disk. \end{description} @@ -729,7 +729,7 @@ with signature $\widetilde{C} := S_K(\FDH_K(C_p))$ exchanges accepted by the merchant where each $X_j$ is a exchange's public key. \item[Proposal] - The merchant creates a digitally signed contract + The merchant creates a signed contract $\mathcal{A} := S_M(m, f, a, H(p, r), \vec{X})$ where $m$ is an identifier for this transaction, $f$ is the price of the offer, and $a$ is data relevant